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    Because I Care

    Post by Guest on Sat Mar 16, 2013 6:18 pm

    A girl ran through the forest till she reached her destination, a grave of another girl named Miku.

    Kneeling down in front of it, she gave a prayer.

    And the God in heavens heard it, and the light shone onto Miku's grave, reviving the person inside.

    "Hello, Miku." the girl said, smiling sorrowfully

    "I didn't expect to see you here, Rin." Miku responded

    (a year later)

    Rin, Len and Miku, all three together, were peeking around the corner.

    "When I give the signal, run to the palace and stay there till I come." Rin told the two.

    They did so and Rin revealed herself to her former subjects.

    "Do you know the way to the church?" Rin asked, knowing that Kaito and his new wife, Meiko, were there.

    "I'll take you."

    Rin entered the church, pulling out the small knife which gleamed in the sunlight wickedly.

    After all, those were the very people who kept Miku despite the danger and killed her brother.

    She was doing this last act for them.

    So Len and Miku could rule over Yellow Country.

    She ran towards Kaito and Meiko in blind rage and sliced their heads clean off.


    In the meantime, Len and Miku reached the palace and were currently inside.

    "Miku....I love you..."

    "I knew." Miku said


    Rin quickly left the church, washing blood from her hands in nearby fountain.

    That she went inside the castle, joining Len and Miku there.

    "How have you been, sister?" Len teased

    "Don't call me that." Rin said "Your sister was evil, and your sister is now dead. I am just Rin."

    And she took the vial from her pocket.

    "God, take me into your family."

    And she drank from the vial in one big gulp, falling to the floor afterwards. The vial fell onto the ground and shattered.

    "It should have been me...." Rin whispered with last of her strength "Now, it is...."

    And she died.

    Len and Miku could only stare at her corpse quietly.
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    Re: Because I Care

    Post by HAIR on Sat Mar 16, 2013 6:26 pm

    Very Powerful


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    Re: Because I Care

    Post by MnRebel27 on Mon Mar 25, 2013 5:25 pm

    That was much darker than your normal stories. As a fan of dark works, I must say that I enjoyed it!


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