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    Jinjuriki Chronicles

    Post by Guest on Fri Jul 12, 2013 1:55 pm

    This is part one of my Jinjuriki Chronicles. A gift for Gaara's birthday.

    A girl sat alone in dark corner. Her green hair framed her face and her azure eyes stared at children playing tag. She desperately wanted to join them, but she knew she can't. They'd reject her anyway.

    Around that time, a travelling troupe arrived at her village. There were seven boys and one girl and they all had some talent they showed. When the show was done, they all disappeared

    (backstage)

    "We need to find the last one."

    "Oh, don't worry, Utakata will take care of that."

    (outside)

    "Now who would like to be a part of my special experiment." Utakata said, as he scanned the crowd and noticed a black robe with red clouds on it. He averted his gaze to follow where Akatsuki member was looking as spotted a girl. He smiled, finally his search was over. He fired few bubbles out of his mouth and they struck the Akatsuki member head on. Obstacle eliminated, he turned his attention back to the girl

    "What's your name?" he asked

    "I am Fu." the girl answered.

    "Well, Fu. Will you come with us? We will treat you well." Utakata offered.

    Time passed since she joined them. They formed a village of their own and during the first few days she noticed a redhead who looked as if the world weighed on his shoulders. He kept his head low all the time.


    (Chapter 1 ends here)
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    Re: Jinjuriki Chronicles

    Post by HAIR on Fri Jul 12, 2013 2:29 pm

    nice an interesting start


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    Post by Guest on Sun Jul 14, 2013 7:20 am

    The group had left the next day, using a road on the cliff. They tied the rope to stable rock before arriving into the village. The rope was low enough for Fu to grab it and climb up the cliff. They all would rendezvous there afterwards and discuss the plans how to elude the Akatsuki. They were all Jinjuriki, Demon Guardians, making them the targets of Akatsuki.

    Fu managed to successfully climb up and was now facing the other eight.

    "So what do we do next?" one of them spoke

    "Well, we need to find out what our element is, so there is this paper." another said, passing the paper.

    The end results were soon revealed.

    Gaara-Earth, Yugito-Fire, Rin-Water, Roshi-Wind, Han-Fire, Yagura- Water Kirabi - Lightning, Naruto - Wind, Fu-Water and Obito-Water.

    "Now that we know, time to start our training

    Little did they know that Obito was an Akatsuki spy and that Rin was a water clone created by Obito in the image of Rin he loved.

    (time skip)

    Yugito, Fu, Kirabi, Naruto, Yagura, Han and Roshi were now facing against Obito, who was controlling Rin's water clone.

    "Why?"

    "Because of this." Obito said, nodding towards the water clone "I used to know the real Rin, but she was taken from me. I want her back, that's why!"

    His outburst was met with silence

    "Now, Rin, my love, drown them. We will have whole world just for us if this plan works out!" Obito ordered in slightly crazy voice

    And so the battle began.
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    Post by HAIR on Sun Jul 14, 2013 1:53 pm

    Driven to madness by obsession how very understandable


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    Re: Jinjuriki Chronicles

    Post by Duel K. on Sun Jul 14, 2013 9:06 pm

    Nice, naruto fan fic, DK seal of approval
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    Re: Jinjuriki Chronicles

    Post by Kilering on Thu Jul 18, 2013 7:20 pm

    Nice fan tic....wouldn't Fu be wind....Since the seven tails flies....and she uses Wind jutsu ...


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